A student came in with three research internships and an essay that read like a CV. We threw out the list and found the real thread — a stubborn curiosity that started with taking apart a broken radio at home — and rebuilt the essay around it so the achievements finally meant something.
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For the robotics captain with no essay yet.
Now booking a small number of students for the [2026–27] cycle.
Lila’s note
I’m not a test-prep center or an app. I’m one person who takes a small number of students each cycle and reads every draft myself — because most students don’t know how to tell their own story yet, and that’s exactly what I love helping with.
Who I work with, around the world
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Meet Lila
Hi, I’m Lila — and I love a messy first draft.
I fell for this work the way most people fall for a good book: quietly, and then all at once. Somewhere between a student’s stiff first paragraph and the sentence that finally sounded like them, I realized I’d found the thing I wanted to do for a living.
So this isn’t an agency and it isn’t a side hustle. It’s my whole practice — a small number of students each year, every draft read by me, every note written in my own voice. No junior editors, no templates, no essay mill.
Mostly I’m the person in your corner who has read thousands of these and still gets genuinely excited when a real story shows up on the page. That’s the part I can’t fake, and it’s the part that tends to make the difference.
- Based in
- [City, Country] · working remotely worldwide
- Background
- [Your degree / relevant background]
- Specialty
- International & STEM applicants
- Each cycle
- A small, deliberately limited number of students
One-on-one, video sessions · every draft read personally
Essay coaching
What we’ll actually do together
‘Essay help’ can mean anything, so here’s exactly what it means with me — the real, specific, sometimes unglamorous work.
- Find the story worth telling before a single word gets drafted
- Turn research, code, and lab hours into a narrative an admissions officer actually feels
- Translate a non-US school system so your record reads at full value
- Build one application-wide narrative — not one good essay and six orphans
- Cut the clichés: the mission trip, the big game, the grandparent opening
- Protect your voice through every round of edits
- Plan supplements early so seven “why us” essays don't eat your October
- Rehearse honest, specific answers before interviews
- Keep everything ethical — coaching and editing, never ghostwriting
- Give the final, cold read before you press submit
Why work with me
A real person in your corner — not a factory
01
It's just me — never an agency
You get one person, start to finish. I read every draft myself and keep only a small number of students each cycle so I can stay close to yours.
02
Your voice, protected
My job is to make you sound more like you, not less. I coach and edit; I never ghostwrite. Every word stays yours.
03
Honest — and kind about it
No empty cheerleading and no generic notes. I'll tell you the truth about a draft: gently, specifically, and always on your side.
04
I've sat where you're sitting
I know how it feels to stare at a prompt and freeze. That quiet, stuck moment is exactly the one I love helping with.
Also available
Extra services
Beyond the personal statement, I help with the rest of the application too. Mix and match whatever you actually need.
- 01Supplemental & “why us” essays
- 02Activities list & additional information
- 03Honors, scholarship & program essays
- 04Transfer & re-applicant essays
- 05Interview preparation
- 06Application-wide narrative strategy
- 07School-list positioning & fit
- 08Deadline mapping across early & regular rounds
- 09Translating a non-US school record
- 10A final, cold read before you submit
The method, live
The first draft is never the problem.
Every strong essay I’ve coached started with lines like the ones on the right. The work isn’t avoiding bad sentences — it’s knowing which one, three drafts down, was the real opening all along.
Draft 01 — opening lines
- 01
Ever since I was young, I have always loved science.
cliché — cut - 02
I want to use technology to change the world.
everyone does — cut - 03
Winning first place taught me the value of hard work.
the trophy isn't the story - 04
The pH meter read 4.7. It was supposed to read 7.
keep — start here
Sample markup, written for this panel — the method is real, the draft is not a student’s.
How we’ll work together
From a blank page to an essay that sounds like you
No mystery and no bloat — just four unhurried stages, and me beside you the whole way.
- 01
We start with a conversation
Before anything else, we just talk — no forms, no script. I want to hear how you think and what you actually care about. Most students leave this first call already sensing which story is theirs.
- 02
We find your story first
We don't open a blank document and panic. Together we dig until we hit the thing worth writing about — usually something you'd never have guessed was “essay material.”
- 03
You write; I stay close
You draft, and I'm in the margins the whole way — asking questions, pushing gently, keeping it yours. Coaching and editing, never a word written for you.
- 04
We polish until it sounds like you
Line by line, we tighten everything and read it out loud. When you finally submit, it sounds unmistakably like you on your most honest, most alive day.
See it in action
What a session actually looks like
No slides, no lecture. We open your draft together, I ask the questions I’d ask an admissions reader, and we chase the sentence that finally sounds like you. Here’s a short walkthrough of how that feels.
- Live, over video — recorded so you can rewatch
- Real-time margin notes you keep afterwards
- You leave with a clear next step, never a blank page
Recent work
How I've helped students
A few representative examples of the work — the kind of problem we start with, and where it ends up. Replaced with real, permission-cleared stories over time.
An applicant strong on paper kept writing 'why us' essays that flattered each school. We rewrote them around specific courses, a lab's actual work, and one problem they genuinely wanted to solve — so every supplement sounded like a person, not a brochure.
A student worried their voice would get flattened into something generically American. We worked in the opposite direction — protecting the phrasing and perspective that were distinctly theirs — until the essay read unmistakably like them.
Selected essays
A few that stuck with me
Short excerpts, shared with permission and lightly anonymized. The full collection lives on the results page.
Common App Personal Statement
The Spice Rack
I alphabetized my mother's spices the week after the funeral. Allspice, basil, cardamom — as if the pantry were the one thing left I could put in order.
Shared with the student’s permission; identifying details altered.
Supplemental Essay
Why This College — And Why I Almost Didn't Apply
Most 'why us' essays flatter the school. This one opened with the reason the student assumed they'd never get in, then quietly dismantled it.
Shared with the student’s permission; identifying details altered.
Activities / Community Essay
The Robotics Team That Kept Losing
A STEM student who wanted to write about a win. We found the better essay in the three years the team lost, and what he learned about staying anyway.
Shared with the student’s permission; identifying details altered.
In their words
What students say afterwards
I only publish words from students who’ve given permission, so this space stays honest — real quotes will live here as families say yes to sharing them.
Real student words will live here. I only publish testimonials from students who’ve given permission — so this space stays empty until those are ready, rather than filling it with anything invented.
Pricing packages
Discover the right pricing plan for you.
Simple, transparent packages — from a single honest read to full-cycle support. The intro call is always free.
01
The Personal Statement
3–4 sessions
Focused work on the Common App essay — from blank page to final draft. Best for students who feel solid on the rest of the application and want the main essay to be unmistakably theirs.
- Brainstorm & story-mapping session
- Structural feedback on every draft
- Line edits on the final version
- Async margin comments between sessions
Starting at [PLACEHOLDER]
02Most chosen
Full Application
Ongoing through the cycle
The personal statement plus supplements for your full school list. We build a coherent application where every essay pulls in the same direction.
- Everything in The Personal Statement
- Supplemental essays for your full list
- Application-wide strategy & positioning
- Priority scheduling in the fall
Starting at [PLACEHOLDER]
03
A Second Read
1 sessionYou've done the work and want one honest, experienced read before you submit. A single deep session with direct, specific notes.
Starting at [PLACEHOLDER]
Fit
Is this the right kind of help for you?
I take a small number of students each cycle, so being honest about fit up front saves us both time.
A good fit if…
- You have real material — research, a hard-won perspective, a story you've never told — and you don't know how to get it onto the page.
- You're applying from a different school system and worry your record won't translate.
- You want an honest reader who will push you, not a cheerleader.
- You care about doing this ethically, in your own voice.
Probably not if…
- You want someone to write the essay for you. I don't ghostwrite, ever.
- You're looking for a guarantee of admission. No honest coach can offer one.
- You want to start the night before it's due. Good essays need room to breathe.
- You'd rather sound like everyone else than take a real risk on the page.
Questions
See all questions & pricingA few things families ask first
More detail — pricing, scheduling, and the ethics of it — lives on the services page.
- Q01When should we start?
- The summer before senior year is ideal — we have room to brainstorm properly before the fall crunch. That said, I take on students well into the fall. If you're reading this in October, it's not too late; we'll just move faster.
- Q02How do sessions actually work?
- We meet over video. Between sessions you write and I respond in the document with margin comments. Most families find a rhythm of a call every week or two, with async feedback in between.
- Q03What happens in a brainstorm session?
- Mostly I ask questions and you talk. I'm listening for the moment your voice changes — the story you tell almost by accident is usually the essay. You leave the first session with two or three real directions, not a blank page.
- Q04Do you write or rewrite the essay for me?
- No. This is coaching, editing, and strategy — never ghostwriting. Every word stays yours. That's both an ethical line and a practical one: admissions officers can tell when an essay wasn't written by the applicant, and colleges take it seriously.
- Q05Do you work with international students?
- Yes, and often. I'm careful to sharpen your voice rather than sand it down into something generically 'American.' A distinct perspective is an asset in the pile, not a liability.
- Q06Can you help with supplements, not just the personal statement?
- Absolutely. Supplements are where a lot of applications are quietly won or lost. The 'why us' and short-answer prompts reward specificity, and that's very coachable.
- Q07How many students do you take?
- A limited number each cycle, on purpose. This is one person's practice, not an agency — I'd rather work closely with a handful of students than spread thin across dozens.
- Q08What does it cost?
- It depends on the package and how much support you want. Pricing is on the Services page, and the intro call is always free — that's where we figure out whether we're a fit before anyone commits.
Free advice
Browse the blogReading room
Honest, specific essay advice I give away for free — the same thinking my students get, minus the deadlines.
Personal Statement14 min read
What Kind of College Essay Should You Write?
Before you pick a topic, pick a shape. Most people skip that step entirely — and it shows.
Read→Application Strategy2 min read
What Admissions Officers Actually Read For
They have eight minutes and a thousand applications. Here's what actually makes one of them slow down.
Read→Personal Statement2 min read
The Difference Between a Good Essay and a Memorable One
A good essay is clean, correct, and forgotten by the next application. A memorable one breaks one small rule on purpose.
Read→One last thing
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